A PRINTER’S GUIDE TO CORRECTED PROOFS / EIGNER COLLECTED POEMS (9/30/09)
(listed by volume & page number, in order of occurrence in edition)
A. Master List of Corrections & Queries to Printer
- Vol. I, p. xvii (check dot above “the” (on proof page only?) & delete—not in original).
- Vol. I, pp. xxvii-xxxiv (delete —mistakenly placed here; repeats pp. xxvii-xxxiv in Vol. IV).
- Vol. I, p. 40 (fix broken “e” in “the”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 41 (fix broken “e” in “enemy”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 57 (fix broken “r” in “nursery”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 58 (fix broken “r” in “surveyed”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 71 (fix broken “m” in “time”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 76 (fix broken “t” in “tread”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 77 (insert space between “4” & “7” in date line—error in original).
- Vol. I, p. 81 (fix broken “b” in “bush”—error in original).
- Vol. I, p. 90 (fix broken “o” in “October”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 105 (fix broken “y” in “musty”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 139 (check smudge (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. I, p. 177 (delete space between “#” & “n” in date line—error in original).
- Vol. I, p. 178 (fix broken “l” in “flagpole”—error in original).
- Vol. I, p. 197 (fix broken “a” in “taken”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 198 (check smudge (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. I, p. 205 (fix broken “b” in “imperceptible”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 208 (check smudge (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. I, p. 210 (change “Marshal” to “Marshall” in footnote—error in original).
- Vol. I, p. 238 (check 3 dots (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. I, p. 249 (fix black dot in “f” in “fat”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 250 (fix broken “s” in “Mountains”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 282 (fix broken “n” in “L’une”—not in original).
- Vol. I, p. 283 (fix broken “a” in “coals”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 289 (fix broken “r” in “Ares”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 290 (restore “0” in “# L 1 0”—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. II, p. 305 (fix broken letters in “broken”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 321 (check large dot (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 323 (restore apostrophe in “# 3 i '”—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. II, p. 326 (fix broken “e” in “shepherd”—error in original).
- Vol. II, p. 327 (fix broken “w” in “how”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 331 (fix broken “a” in “all”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 351 (check blotch (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 382 (restore right part of “r” in date line—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. II, p. 394 (check two streaks (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 407 (fix broken “y” in “you”—error in original).
- Vol. II, p. 437 (fix broken “e” in “ogive”—error in original).
- Vol. II, p. 445 (fix faint letter “n” in “men”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 446 (check streak above “snow” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 453 (check dot below date line (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 454 (change “fail” to “fall” in line 16—error in original).
- Vol. II, p. 468 (check dot above date line (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 475 (fix dot in “u” in “rusts”—error in original).
- Vol. II, p. 486 (check dot next to “forces” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 496 (fix broken “g” in “hedge”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 499 (fix broken “t” in “distance”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 506 (fix broken “e” in “stones”—error in original).
- Vol. II, p. 511 (change “Aquitane” to “Aquitaine”—error in original).
- Vol. II, p. 513 (check two dots (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 516 (fix broken “g” in “making”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 527 (check dot above “near” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 528 (check dot below “a” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 532 (fix broken “r” in “are”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 536 (fix broken “u” in “continued”—error in original).
- Vol. II, p. 549 (fix broken “n” in “moments”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 564 (check streak (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 571 (fix broken “k” in “thick”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 576 (fix broken “I”—error in original).
- Vol. II, p. 581 (fix broken “f” in “flying”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 591 (fix broken letters in “various”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 605 (fix broken “d” in “found”—error in original).
- Vol. II, p. 606 (fix bottom edge of letters in “a shirt”—original is good).
- Vol. II, p. 618 (check blotch (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 662 (fix broken “i” in “is”—not in original).
- Vol. II, p. 712 (restore section-division period after line 7—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. II, p. 726 (check occurrence of 6 blank pages after p. 726 in proof copy—correct?)
- Vol. III, p. 760 (fix blotch above “3” in date line—error in original).
- Vol. III, p. 776 (fix broken “l” in “world”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 779 (fix broken “e” in “tree”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 816 (fix broken “n” in “Holland”—error in original).
- Vol. III, p. 843 (check streaks on left (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 844 (check streaks on left (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 855 (fix broken “h” in “the”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 893 (fix broken “k” in “thick”—error in original).
- Vol. III, p. 899 (fix broken letters in “towards”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 914 (check smudge (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 963 (restore section-division period in last poem —omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. III, p. 967 (fix broken “u” in “cough”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 971 (check streak (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 977 (delete extra “e” in “feeet” in Keats quotation—error in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1002 (fix broken “t” in “still”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1011 (fix broken “s” in “was”—error in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1025 (fix broken “f” in “fief”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1047 (fix broken “t” in “the”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1067 (fix broken “n” in “suddenly”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1124 (fix broken “a” in “dream”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1157 (fix broken “t” in “streets”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1174 (fix broken “e” in “while”—error in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1175 (restore page # (“1175”)—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. III, p. 1185 (fix broken “h” in “reaching”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1208 (fix broken “r” in “inferno”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1222 (check mark upper right (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 1227 (check dot above “got” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 1284 (restore right part of “6” in date line—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. III, p. 1291 (fix broken “t” in “month”—not in original).
- Vol. III, p. 1317 (fix broken “t” in “it”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1351 (restore two words (“dans la”)—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. IV, p. 1394 (fix broken “g” in “imagine”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1402 (fix broken “f” in “offspring”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1428 (fix broken “d” in “shadow”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1436 (fix broken “d” in “death”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1449 (check streak below “years” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. IV, p. 1476 (fix dot in “u” in “house”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1484 (fix broken “n” in “and”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1495 (fix broken “s” in “is” & “e” in “see”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1498 (fix broken “e” in “middle” & “c” in “catch”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1504 (fix broken “t” in “the”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1505 (fix broken “e” in “water”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1509 (fix broken “t” in “often”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1512 (fix broken “e” in “there” & “s” in “times”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1516 (fix broken “s” in “awareness”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1522 (check blotch lower left (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. IV, p. 1532 (restore “86” in “1486” & “7” in “1487”—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. IV, p. 1533 (fix blurred “e” in “these”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1555 (fix broken “o” in “look”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1563 (fix broken “r” in “Bur-“—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1574 (fix broken “a” in “water”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1586 (fix broken letters in “Grinder”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1597 (fix broken “s” in “streets”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1611 (fix broken “c” in “itching”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1622 (make apostrophe in date line slanted—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1636 (delete “e” in “beetween”; make double-dagger bold—errors in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1655 (fix broken “r” in “paradise”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1656 (delete space before “3” in date line—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1662 (fix broken “a” in “band”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1683 (fix broken “d” in “odd”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1684 (restore right edge of “h” in “growth”—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. IV, p. 1685 (restore right edge of “s” in “shores”—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. IV, p. 1686 (fix broken “n” in “rain”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1688 (fix broken “v” in “Yugoslavia”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1743 (iii) (title wrong font; re-scan new page—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1745 (v) (insert blank line before “I, 198”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1750 (x) (insert blank line before “III, 847”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1754 (xiv) (fix broken “n” in “sun” & “d” in “head”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1762 (xxii) (delete blank line before “IV, 1577”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, pp. 1767-1773 (xxvii-xxxiii) (replace with new pages—errors in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1779 (xxxix) (fix broken “E” in “INDEX”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1785 (xlv) (fix broken “r” in “motor”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1788 (xlviii) (fix broken “b” in “blue”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1790 (l) (fix broken “c” in “circles”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1794 (liv) (fix broken “5” in “1050”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1804 (lxiv) (fix broken “g” in “got”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1807 (lxvii) (fix broken “R” in “DREAM”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1811 (lxxi) (fix broken “o” in “window”—error in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1823 (lxxxiii) (fix broken “c” in “icicle”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1827 (lxxxvii) (fix broken “r” in “tree”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1828 (lxxxviii) (fix broken “6” in “1126”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1829 (lxxxix) (fix broken “s” in “things”—not in original).
- Vol. IV, p. 1835 (xcv) (fix broken “w” in “wood”—not in original).
B. Errors in Proofs (not in original) & Queries to Printer (as marked on proof pages)
- Vol. I, p. xvii (check dot above “the” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. I, pp. xxvii-xxxiv (delete this section, mistakenly placed here).
- Vol. I, p. 139 (check smudge (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. I, p. 198 (check smudge (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. I, p. 208 (check smudge (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. I, p. 238 (check 3 dots (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 290 (restore “0” in “# L 1 0”—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. II, p. 321 (check large dot (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 323 (restore apostrophe in “# 3 i '”—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. II, p. 351 (check blotch (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 382 (restore right part of “r” in date line—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. II, p. 394 (check two streaks (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 446 (check streak above “snow” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 453 (check dot below date line (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 468 (check dot above date line (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 486 (check dot next to “forces” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 513 (check two dots (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 527 (check dot above “near” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 528 (check dot below “a” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 564 (check streak (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 618 (check blotch (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. II, p. 712 (restore section-division period after line 7—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. II, p. 726 (check occurrence of 6 blank pages after p. 726 in proof copy—correct?).
- Vol. III, p. 843 (check streaks on left (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 844 (check streaks on left (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 914 (check smudge (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 963 (restore section-division period in last poem—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. III, p. 971 (check streak (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 1175 (restore page # (“1175”)—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. III, p. 1222 (check mark upper right (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 1227 (check dot above “got” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. III, p. 1284 (restore right part of “6” in date line—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. IV, p. 1351 (restore two words (“dans la”)—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. IV, p. 1449 (check streak below “years” (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. IV, p. 1522 (check blotch lower left (on proof page only?) & delete as necessary).
- Vol. IV, p. 1532 (restore “86” in “1486” & “7” in “1487”—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. IV, p. 1684 (restore right edge of “h” in “growth”—omitted in proof copy).
- Vol. IV, p. 1685 (restore right edge of “s” in “shores”—omitted in proof copy).
C. Broken Letters in Proofs (not in original)(as marked on proof pages)
- Vol. I, p. 40 (fix broken “e” in “the”).
- Vol. I, p. 41 (fix broken “e” in “enemy”).
- Vol. I, p. 57 (fix broken “r” in “nursery”).
- Vol. I, p. 58 (fix broken “r” in “surveyed”).
- Vol. I, p. 71 (fix broken “m” in “time”).
- Vol. I, p. 76 (fix broken “t” in “tread”).
- Vol. I, p. 90 (fix broken “o” in “October”).
- Vol. I, p. 105 (fix broken “y” in “musty”).
- Vol. I. p. 197 (fix broken “a” in “taken”).
- Vol. I, p. 205 (fix broken “b” in “imperceptible”).
- Vol. I, p. 249 (fix black dot in “f” in “fat”).
- Vol. I, p. 250 (fix broken “s” in “Mountains”).
- Vol. I, p. 282 (fix broken “n” in “L’une”).
- Vol. I, p. 283 (fix broken “a” in “coals”).
- Vol. II, p. 289 (fix broken “r” in “Ares”).
- Vol. II, p. 305 (fix broken letters in “broken”).
- Vol. II, p. 327 (fix broken “w” in “how”).
- Vol. II, p. 331 (fix broken “a” in “all”).
- Vol. II, p. 445 (fix faint letter “n” in “men”).
- Vol. II, p. 496 (fix broken “g” in “hedge”).
- Vol. II, p. 499 (fix broken “t” in “distance”).
- Vol. II, p. 516 (fix broken “g” in “making”).
- Vol. II, p. 532 (fix broken “r” in “are”).
- Vol. II, p. 549 (fix broken “n” in “moments”).
- Vol. II, p. 571 (fix broken “k” in “thick”).
- Vol. II, p. 581 (fix broken “f” in “flying”).
- Vol. II, p. 591 (fix broken letters in “various”).
- Vol. II, p. 606 (fix bottom edge of letters in “a shirt”).
- Vol. II, p. 662 (fix broken “i” in “is”).
- Vol. III, p. 776 (fix broken “l” in “world”).
- Vol. III, p. 779 (fix broken “e” in “tree”).
- Vol. III, p. 855 (fix broken “h” in “the”).
- Vol. III, p. 899 (fix broken letters in “towards”).
- Vol. III, p. 967 (fix broken “u” in “cough”).
- Vol. III, p. 1002 (fix broken “t” in “still”).
- Vol. III, p. 1025 (fix broken “f” in “fief”).
- Vol. III, p. 1047 (fix broken “t” in “the”).
- Vol. III, p. 1067 (fix broken “n” in “suddenly”).
- Vol. III, p. 1124 (fix broken “a” in “dream”).
- Vol. III, p. 1157 (fix broken “t” in “streets”).
- Vol. III, p. 1185 (fix broken “h” in “reaching”).
- Vol. III, p. 1208 (fix broken “r” in “inferno”).
- Vol. III, p. 1291 (fix broken “t” in “month”).
- Vol. III, p. 1317 (fix broken “t” in “it”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1402 (fix broken “f” in “offspring”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1428 (fix broken “d” in “shadow”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1436 (fix broken “d” in “death”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1484 (fix broken “n” in “and”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1495 (fix broken “s” in “is” & “e” in “see”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1498 (fix broken “e” in “middle” & “c” in “catch”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1505 (fix broken “e” in “water”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1509 (fix broken “t” in “often”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1512 (fix broken “e” in “there” & “s” in “times”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1516 (fix broken “s” in “awareness”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1533 (fix blurred “e” in “these”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1563 (fix broken “r” in “Bur-”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1574 (fix broken “a” in “water”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1586 (fix broken letters in “Grinder”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1611 (fix broken “c” in “itching”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1655 (fix broken “r” in “paradise”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1686 (fix broken “n” in “rain”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1754 (xiv) (fix broken “n” in “sun” & “d” in “head”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1779 (xxxix) (fix broken “E” in “INDEX”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1785 (xlv) (fix broken “r” in “motor”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1790 (l) (fix broken “c” in “circles”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1804 (lxiv) (fix broken “g” in “got”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1807 (lxvii) (fix broken “R” in “DREAM”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1823 (lxxxiii) (fix broken “c” in “icicle”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1827 (lxxxvii) (fix broken “r” in “tree”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1828 (lxxxviii) (fix broken “6” in “1126”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1829 (lxxxix) (fix broken “s” in “things”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1835 (xcv) (fix broken “w” in “wood”).
D. Errors & Broken Letters in Original (as marked on proof pages)
- Vol. I, p. 77 (insert space between “4” & “7” in date line).
- Vol. I, p. 81 (fix broken “b” in “bush”).
- Vol. I, p. 177 (delete space between “#” & “n” in date line).
- Vol. I, p. 178 (fix broken “l” in “flagpole”).
- Vol. I, p. 210 (change “Marshal” to “Marshall” in footnote).
- Vol. II, p. 326 (fix broken “e” in “shepherd”).
- Vol. II, p. 407 (fix broken “y” in “you”).
- Vol. II, p. 437 (fix broken “e” in “ogive”).
- Vol. II, p. 454 (change “fail” to “fall” in line 16).
- Vol. II, p. 475 (fix dot in “u” in “rusts”).
- Vol. II, p. 506 (fix broken “e” in “stones”).
- Vol. II, p. 511 (change “Aquitane” to “Aquitaine”).
- Vol. II, p. 536 (fix broken “u” in “continued”).
- Vol. II, p. 576 (fix broken “I”).
- Vol. II, p. 605 (fix broken “d” in “found”).
- Vol. III, p. 760 (fix blotch above “3” in date line).
- Vol. III, p. 816 (fix broken “n” in “Holland”).
- Vol. III, p. 893 (fix broken “k” in “thick”).
- Vol. III, p. 977 (delete extra “e” in “feeet” in Keats quotation).
- Vol. III, p. 1011 (fix broken “s” in “was”).
- Vol. III, p. 1174 (fix broken “e” in “while”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1394 (fix broken “g” in “imagine”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1476 (fix dot in “u” in “house”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1504 (fix broken “t” in “the”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1555 (fix broken “o” in “look”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1597 (fix broken “s” in “streets”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1622 (make apostrophe in date line slanted).
- Vol. IV, p. 1636 (delete extra “e” in “beetween” & make double-dagger bold).
- Vol. IV, p. 1656 (delete space before “3” in date line).
- Vol. IV, p. 1662 (fix broken “a” in “band”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1683 (fix broken “d” in “odd”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1688 (fix broken “v” in “Yugoslavia”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1743 (iii) (title wrong font; re-scan new page).
- Vol. IV, p. 1745 (v) (insert blank line before “I, 198”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1750 (x) (insert blank line before “III, 847”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1762 (xxii) (delete blank line before “IV, 1577”).
- Vol. IV, pp. 1767-1773 (xxvii-xxxiii) (replace with new pages).
- Vol. IV, p. 1788 (xlviii) (fix broken “b” in “blue”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1794 (liv) (fix broken “5” in “1050”).
- Vol. IV, p. 1811 (lxxi) (fix broken “o” in “window”).
—Robert Grenier