<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/' xmlns:gd="http://schemas.google.com/g/2005"><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post111513718022589518..comments</id><updated>2011-07-13T16:13:18.645-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Comments on Silliman&#39;s Blog: </title><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/feeds/comments/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html'/><link rel="hub" href="http://pubsubhubbub.appspot.com/"/><author><name>Unknown</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>15</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>25</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111605006989814500</id><published>2005-05-14T01:54:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-14T01:54:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Why do discussions such as this always descend int...</title><summary type='text'>Why do discussions such as this always descend into opinion?&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Wouldn&#39;t you say that this &quot;heavy alliteration&quot; is appropriate given Mr Kaufman&#39;s comments above?  If the poems in this remarkable book were only observational and comtemplative then they would be weak. What gives them their power is that uneasy feeling that all is not as it seems - the friction between the external &amp; internal </summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111605006989814500'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111605006989814500'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1116050040000#c111605006989814500' title=''/><author><name>Anonymous</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-846577922"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 14, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111564802513481853</id><published>2005-05-09T10:13:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-09T10:13:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>The joke in that piece above lies precisely in our...</title><summary type='text'>&lt;I&gt;The joke in that piece above lies precisely in our recognition of how that final word mimics the sound of insect wings. Massey not only has to do it, but we have to get it for the poem to work. He makes it seem effortless. &lt;/I&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;I disagree with this last statement on a number of levels.  First of all, by the time I got past three separate instances of alliteration in 5 short lines, my </summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111564802513481853'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111564802513481853'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115647980000#c111564802513481853' title=''/><author><name>R. Joyce Heon</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-846577922"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 09, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111556045266925765</id><published>2005-05-08T09:54:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-08T09:54:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Webster&#39;s Unabridged defines it as a muddy place, ...</title><summary type='text'>Webster&#39;s Unabridged defines it as a muddy place, or mire.  Says it is used in the Mississippi Valley and in California.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Metaphorical meaning, a place from which one finds it difficult to extricate oneself.  Bunyan&#39;s Slough of Despond -- a place of spiritual despair.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;It can also be used as a verb, to slough off.  And the pus coming out of a wound is defined as a slough. &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111556045266925765'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111556045266925765'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115560440000#c111556045266925765' title=''/><author><name>Anonymous</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-846577922"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 08, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111555945559489808</id><published>2005-05-08T09:37:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-08T09:37:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>When I lived in Seattle there were lots of referen...</title><summary type='text'>When I lived in Seattle there were lots of references to sloughs as you drove north toward Canada.  &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Then a slough must connect to salt water?&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;I will look up these connections later. I suppose this explains it. I have never lived close to salt water on the east coast.  I am generally about 150 miles inland.  I wonder if there are sloughs in the Gloucester area that Olson </summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111555945559489808'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111555945559489808'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115559420000#c111555945559489808' title=''/><author><name>Anonymous</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-846577922"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 08, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111553642036285506</id><published>2005-05-08T03:13:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-08T03:13:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Thanks for the feedback anonymous. I think I might...</title><summary type='text'>Thanks for the feedback anonymous. I think I might have been short-circuiting my responses there, or maybe conflating them works better. I am out of my expertise on Goldsworthy; as to an exploration of the fuzzy stuff, which need not stay fuzzy - no? - I would still love to see it here, or perhaps I&#39;ve missed it - only been round since fall.</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111553642036285506'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111553642036285506'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115536380000#c111553642036285506' title=''/><author><name>Sean Mac</name><uri>https://www.blogger.com/profile/00636091474236404388</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-1010402395"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 08, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111552403610528682</id><published>2005-05-07T23:47:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-07T23:47:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Ron:  There&#39;s that Hannibul Lector portrait again!...</title><summary type='text'>Ron:  There&#39;s that Hannibul Lector portrait again!&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Have you ever fished?&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;I&#39;m a dead-eye catch and release fly-fisherman.  &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;With any luck, I&#39;ll catch a mermaid someday.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Surf fishing is a whole different ball of twine.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;I&#39;ve snorkled in the South Pacific, and it&#39;s like being in a dream.  The tubefish look and move like something from outer space.</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111552403610528682'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111552403610528682'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115524020000#c111552403610528682' title=''/><author><name>Anonymous</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-846577922"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 07, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111550884806719613</id><published>2005-05-07T19:34:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-07T19:34:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>References to Eastern sloughs:http://saltfishing.a...</title><summary type='text'>References to Eastern sloughs:&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;http://saltfishing.about.com/library/weekly/aa001029c.htm&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;http://md.water.usgs.gov/publications/wrir-02-4282/&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;http://www.oysterbaytackle.com/drifting051302.asp&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Good definition of a slough in that last one:&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;&quot;What is a slough?&quot;&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;A slough is when you have a drop-off close to shore that is relatively deep&lt;BR/&gt;and then</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111550884806719613'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111550884806719613'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115508840000#c111550884806719613' title=''/><author><name>Ron</name><uri>https://www.blogger.com/profile/09250950725876683923</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-660918411"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 07, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111550699751642504</id><published>2005-05-07T19:03:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-07T19:03:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>&quot;For me, Massey raises the question of historical ...</title><summary type='text'>&quot;For me, Massey raises the question of historical time in the poem in an interesting, sometimes troubling way.&quot; Ron&lt;BR/&gt;&quot;My memories of his reading have - I now see - almost nothing to do with what Ron is reading. I remember entirely the tension, angst, rage and insecurity - all funnelled through the 40oz&#39;er he was drinking while performing - and that my main impression of the work - and what I </summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111550699751642504'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111550699751642504'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115506980000#c111550699751642504' title=''/><author><name>Anonymous</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-846577922"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 07, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111548479190299386</id><published>2005-05-07T12:53:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-07T12:53:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>There are a lot sloughs on the west coast.  (Prono...</title><summary type='text'>There are a lot sloughs on the west coast.  (Pronounced slooz).  You don&#39;t get them on the east coast, or do you?</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111548479190299386'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111548479190299386'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115484780000#c111548479190299386' title=''/><author><name>Kirby Olson</name><uri>https://www.blogger.com/profile/05952289700191142943</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-1262696662"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 07, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111543791256190665</id><published>2005-05-06T23:51:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-06T23:51:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Kyle:  I think if you&#39;re honest with yourself abou...</title><summary type='text'>Kyle:  I think if you&#39;re honest with yourself about Goldsworthy, you&#39;ll have to admit there&#39;s a random, child-like quality to his environmental installations that is completely gratuitous.  He doens&#39;t think very deeply about the environmental particulars, just sees things on a superficial level and then &quot;adjusts&quot; them or sets out some simplistic design which is not &quot;integrated&quot; with the landscape</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111543791256190665'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111543791256190665'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115437860000#c111543791256190665' title=''/><author><name>Anonymous</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-846577922"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 06, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111541671776052429</id><published>2005-05-06T17:58:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-06T17:58:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Great to see this review, Mr. Silliman. Just to ad...</title><summary type='text'>Great to see this review, Mr. Silliman. &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;Just to add one minor correction: The picture that you have there is the Eureka Slough, but is not the Samoa Peninsula. The peninsula is located a few miles away along the same body of water and has a similar look to it, although a bit more expansive and flanked by the ocean.</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111541671776052429'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111541671776052429'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115416680000#c111541671776052429' title=''/><author><name>kristen heldmann</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-846577922"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 06, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111540312715968092</id><published>2005-05-06T14:12:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-06T14:12:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>It is fascinating to read this. I saw Joe read thi...</title><summary type='text'>It is fascinating to read this. I saw Joe read this very work at the release party for this chapbook last month, at David Hadbawnik&#39;s reading series in SF. My memories of his reading have - I now see - almost nothing to do with what Ron is reading. I remember entirely the tension, angst, rage and insecurity - all funnelled through the 40oz&#39;er he was drinking while performing - and that my main </summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111540312715968092'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111540312715968092'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115403120000#c111540312715968092' title=''/><author><name>Sean Mac</name><uri>https://www.blogger.com/profile/00636091474236404388</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-1010402395"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 06, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111539217101133266</id><published>2005-05-06T11:09:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-06T11:09:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Samoa Penninsula is that strip of land with buildi...</title><summary type='text'>Samoa Penninsula is that strip of land with buildings (which look like light industrial to me) in the foreground of the picture.</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111539217101133266'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111539217101133266'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115392140000#c111539217101133266' title=''/><author><name>Ron</name><uri>https://www.blogger.com/profile/09250950725876683923</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-660918411"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 06, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111539106160280881</id><published>2005-05-06T10:51:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-06T10:51:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>My first exposure to Massey and based upon the wor...</title><summary type='text'>My first exposure to Massey and based upon the work you present here I&#39;d agree - this is remarkable poetry.  Thank you for exposing it again, since I missed it previously.&lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;I am unsure about the contrast with Goldsworthy, though.  I don&#39;t want to make an imperative that says we cannot make comparative analyses between different art forms, but I also wonder about easy shifts between vastly</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111539106160280881'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111539106160280881'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115391060000#c111539106160280881' title=''/><author><name>Jehza</name><uri>https://www.blogger.com/profile/09527708835511076143</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-355639647"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 06, 2005"/></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111538928527145904</id><published>2005-05-06T10:21:00.000-04:00</published><updated>2005-05-06T10:21:00.000-04:00</updated><title type='text'>Joe Massey is a strong poet with a great ear. I&#39;m ...</title><summary type='text'>Joe Massey is a strong poet with a great ear. I&#39;m always happy to read whatever he writes. His restraint is really inspiring. In some ways he reminds me of  Jimmy Schuyler--they both make writing poetry seem soo easy--but if you try to write in that style, you find out how hard it actually is to pull off. Glad to see you giving him some airtime. &lt;BR/&gt;&lt;BR/&gt;-Andy Mr.</summary><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111538928527145904'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='https://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/111513718022589518/comments/default/111538928527145904'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html?showComment=1115389260000#c111538928527145904' title=''/><author><name>Anonymous</name><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='https://img1.blogblog.com/img/blank.gif'/></author><thr:in-reply-to xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0' href='https://ronsilliman.blogspot.com/2005/05/california-department-of-fish-literal.html' ref='tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3738579.post-111513718022589518' source='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/3738579/posts/default/111513718022589518' type='text/html'/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.itemClass" value="pid-846577922"/><gd:extendedProperty name="blogger.displayTime" value="May 06, 2005"/></entry></feed>