I’ve made caustic comments
here about a few poets whom I’ve associated with the tradition I’ve
characterized (to borrow from Edgar Allan Poe) as the school of quietude, that tendency within American letters
that envisions poetry in the United States as continuous with (& mostly
derivative from) verse in the British Isles, and especially from the most
conservative elements there. So the question naturally arises: are there
conservative poets whose work I genuinely like?
The answer is yes. I think
Hart Crane’s The Bridge a master work
of American poetry. There are aspects of Wallace Stevens
work that I like, even though he suffers from being so overrated by his
advocates. Ditto the early Eliot, though the canonization process is not nearly
what it was when I was in college, mercifully. I’ve been reading Jack Gilbert
and Robert Hass with interest & even passion for over 30 years*, have
always thought Berryman’s Dream Songs,
Plath’s Ariel, John
Logan’s Zigzag Walk and even Merwin’s The Lice
admirable. There are elements in Robert Lowell’s best writing that suggest that
he had the potential to have been another Frank O’Hara had he not been so
horrifically dysfunctional, aesthetically as well as emotionally. Alan Dugan is
a guilty pleasure. And Wendell Berry is a poet for
whom the term conservative should be understood literally, in the very best
sense. The values he espouses in his poetry & life seem to me to fit
together seamlessly. So when I come down harshly on a poet such as Richard
Wakefield, it’s because he writes so ineffectively: his sense of metrics could
only be characterized as plodding and bungled.
On my desk is a manuscript
for a book entitled Calendars by
Annie Finch that Tupelo Press will be printing sometime soon. It’s a marvelous
manuscript by a poet who could easily be taken for one of the New Formalists,
in the Timothy Steele vein, but who is also, I would argue, a formalist in the
tradition, say, of Bernadette Mayer & Lee Ann Brown. Which is to say: she gets it. Her commitment is to the
language, even as the strategies she deploys are most often taken from oldest
playbook there is. At times, as in the poem “Moon,” her work reminds me of H.D.’s sense of timing, so very deliberate & ordered:
Then
are you the dense everywhere that moves,
the dark matter they haven’t yet walked through?
(No, I’m not, I’m just the shining sun,
sometimes covered up by the darkness.)
But in your beauty – yes, I know you see –
There is no covering, no constant light.
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the dark matter they haven’t yet walked through?
(No, I’m not, I’m just the shining sun,
sometimes covered up by the darkness.)
But in your beauty – yes, I know you see –
There is no covering, no constant light.
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That supplemental yes in the last couplet, the fact that
the final syllable in each line articulates a phonemic openness, except for the
last, even the use of the capital letter at the start of the final line (but
not in the final line of the other stanzas), all demonstrate a control over the
materials at hand that is extraordinary. That yes functions as though it were a sigh, modulating & redirecting the
timing of the work away from dialog & toward conclusion. It’s a device that
I’ve often been suspicious of – Josephine Miles, another traditionalist whose
work I take seriously, too often incorporated such asides just to even out meter or complete an end-rhyme. Finch uses it
here to halt the flow of the text, to gather the language up into an expression
of breath. It is no accident that every word in that aside uses exactly one
syllable** or that there are no hard consonants there – the only moment in this
six-line text where either of these conditions applies. I love it when someone
can demonstrate such mastery in such a compact terrain.
I want to quote one other
short poem here, my favorite, because of the way in which it blends an
over-the-top sense of language’s lushness with a tone so soft it all but
whispers. It’s called “Butterfly Lullaby.”
My
wild indigo dusky wing
my mottled, broad-wing skipper,
a sleepy, dreamy dusty wing,
flying through my night.
My northern, southern, cloudy wing,
my spring azure, my crescent pearl,
a silver-spotted, sweet question mark,
sleeping in my sky.
A tiger swallowtail, harvester,
moving through my hours,
an eyed brown in the redwing dark,
wrapped softly in my words.
my mottled, broad-wing skipper,
a sleepy, dreamy dusty wing,
flying through my night.
My northern, southern, cloudy wing,
my spring azure, my crescent pearl,
a silver-spotted, sweet question mark,
sleeping in my sky.
A tiger swallowtail, harvester,
moving through my hours,
an eyed brown in the redwing dark,
wrapped softly in my words.
We haven’t had a poet so
capable of combining control & excess since the young Robert Duncan.
* I have a
theory that Jack’s animated & public distaste for langpo has to do with the
fact that he himself, were he younger, would have been
one. This is, after all, the man who once wrote (quoting from memory here):
“Helot for what time there is in the baptist hegemony
of death.”
** Shades
again of H.D. and even of Lew Welch.