Setting
down Paul Blackburn’s The Journals, I
picked up literally the nearest book, wherein I read the following piece,
entitled “intro” to a longer sequence – there are two other parts, both in
three-line stanzas – called “Trilogy”:
monday night i went to the san
francisco art institute to see nathaniel
dorsky’s silent film trilogy, which consists of triste, variations, and arbor
vitae. packed
house. clark
coolidge sat right in front of me. bill berkson, who’d told me this was a
must-not-miss event, did the welcome introductions. nathaniel dorsky explained that,
though folks like to call this set of films a “trilogy,” they are really just
variations on a theme, with the inherent differences brought on by the fact
that he was a different person when he made each film (the first one was
apparently shot in the 70s/80s, the second in the later 80s, the third in the
90s). the first
2 films were beautiful.
about 5 minutes into the 3rd and newest film, the
projector bulb “burned a hole” into the film – an abrupt stop. a 2nd attempt was made –
film mended, rethreaded & started from the beginning. only a few frames after the spot where
the film broke the first time, it burned/broke again. i didn’t wait to see if a 3rd
attempt was made. the
first two films were beautiful. the day before which was sunday it was
seventy degrees. i
went for a walk through golden gate park. and sat down in the shakespeare garden until
dusk.
I
immediately had two distinct, almost contradictory, reactions. The first was
that this piece offers some of the specificity whose absence I’d been mourning
in the abstract after being almost overwhelmed by its presence in Blackburn’s “Ritual.” The second was an ambivalence as to whether or not the author, Del
Ray Cross, even intended it as a poem.
There is
only one other work that uses prose in Cinema Yosemite
– try saying that title fast three times – suggesting that I should be
suspicious about too rapidly categorizing this text as poem, particularly given
the distancing title of “intro” – as if to say, this stands apart from the
“real” body. Yet without it, the poems of ”Trilogy”
only number two. Further, this is a text explicitly about the showing of a
“trilogy” of films, yet in which only two are seen. Both of the other poems
allude to events recounted here, although as poems neither could be said to
depend on such knowledge. Further, there is a leap at the end of this piece,
literally backwards in time by one day, bringing in the detail of the garden in
the park. I end up thinking that this piece is at least as much about the
presence of detail as detail,
not unlike the ways in which Dorsky’s own films*
proceed.
Detail is
in fact a significant dynamic throughout Cinema
Yosemite. Cross, whom I know
only as the editor of Shampoo, appears almost compulsive
in a desire for exactness, a bias that stands him in well in poems that shift
into a more playful gear:
The sky’s blue
but
lightly buttered.
Cross’ line
differs radically from Blackburn’s – it shares more surface characteristics with the
aforementioned Berkson, Robert Creeley & perhaps Alan Bernheimer or Kit Robinson, all of whom tend toward shorter
lines & an impulse toward relatively short stanzas that operate as very
complete, even elegant, units. The deep commitment to craft is a pretty good
guarantee that Cross’ poems will continue to fascinate & compel readers
twenty, thirty years from now.
Approaching
Cross’ work thus, linking it back to Blackburn’s, may be idiosyncratic to the point of nuttiness on
my part, though the test of specificity is a good one for any poet. What really
makes Cross’ book leap out for me, tho, is something altogether different. It’s
the degree to which the man can write unambiguous love poetry, most notably in
the title poem. Talk about lost arts!
Cross’
optimism – it’s related, I’m convinced – comes across even in what on the
surface professes to be a sad poem, “ll Massimo del Panino”**
Have you ever
read a poem
that made you cry
sitting in an
Italian
restaurant
eating
a
spinaci e fontina
panino
across from a
man with a
mustache drinking
a Diet Coke
while another man
walks in, arms-
outstretched shouting
to the owner
“Donald
Trump!
Donald
Trump!”
and next to you
two tablesful
of students
one loudly
letting loose with
“I no
playboy!”
as the
others spatter
sweet lexical
nothings in
German, Italian,
and
Japanese?
This
single-sentence poem is as well crafted & information rich as Blackburn’s, fabulously coy in its refusal to
actually name the poem referenced in
the first stanza. That anonymous writing functions here very much as the
plastic bag blowing back & forth in the street functions in Sam Mendes’
film, American Beauty, an icon of
ineffability, an absent center around which Cross layers on detail after detail
until it is the intensity of detail itself, not what it says that is in fact “the topic” of this poem, just as, in
“RITUAL XVII,” the actual cashing of Blackburn’s check itself is more or less
irrelevant. Each piece celebrates plenitude simply for the possibility of it.
What seals
this particular poem for me is the care with which Cross deploys enjambment
here, virtually the signature device for a Projectivist like Blackburn – think
of the line recognized me from similar
occasions, the. Where for all the Black Mountain poets, enjambment is used almost as
an index of indeterminacy, Cross demonstrates with
absolute elegance how to do it exactly the opposite way. Three lines break with
the article a, a fourth with an, a fifth literally in the middle of a
word, two more on prepositions. That’s nearly a fourth of the poem & yet
only once does these enjambments occur at a stanza break – Cross
is very carefully moving us through lineation as much as syntactic
superstructure through the different realms of this sentence. The one
exception, at the end of the second stanza, prefigures the movement into
Italian in the third as well as calling just enough attention to the device qua device to set up the attentive
reader to hear echo again right in the break between the final two stanzas of
the poem as the adjectives hang deliberately far from their noun, the key word
in the whole poem, nothings.
Cinema Yosemite is precisely the kind of book that
gives one great hope for the future of poetry. In retrospect, I wonder a little
at the serendipity of my picking it up right after the Blackburn until I stop and look a little
harder at the cover, an image of actor George Barnes as the bandit from Edwin
S. Porter’s silent classic, The Great Train Robbery, an
image so closely associated with that first American action
film that it once adorned a 32-cent stamp. This photograph,
I realize, has more than a passing resemblance to none other than Paul
Blackburn.
* The very
strangest & most atypical of which must be the 1976 epic, Revenge of the
Cheerleaders, co-written by Dorsky with Ted Greenwald & the
somewhat mysterious Ace Baandage. This
softcore flick is remembered today primarily for the film debut of Baywatch star David Hasselhoff, complete
with full frontal nudity, in the role, I swear, of “Boner.”
** The title
is the name of a restaurant next door to the Intituto
Italiana di Cultura in San Francisco, on the fringe of the financial
district just outside of North Beach.