There is a
page in
lif e s ent
ence
hic hic
The line,
& I do read this as a line, is a part of a larger piece – I’m tempted to call
it a poem – entitled “Memory Error Theater,” three terms that often apply in
thinking of, or perhaps through, Osman’s
difficult, delightful texts. An Essay in
Asterisks is, first of all, a book of poems, yet in fact that concept
“essay,” a term whose roots extend back to the Latin word for weighing, often
feels as & perhaps even more apt
as a descriptor of the unique process through Osman arrives at these verbal
constructions that so often feel as if they have few antecedents in the history
of literature. What then is the weight of an asterisk?
It’s a
pertinent question here. Osman continually finds – in ways that often surprise
me but do so with that hand-slapping-forehead sense of Oh Yes!, because something that was previously invisible now
suddenly seems obvious – dimensions of meaning lurking in the least likely of
places. One part of why & how Osman arrives at this place has I think to do
with her process, which strikes me as being if not unlike every other poet,
then shared with a very select few (most notably with her partner in the
editing of Chain, Juliana Spahr):
Osman is an investigative poet, indeed to a degree that I suspect Ed Sanders
would find unimaginable.
Unimaginable is a word I think of a lot when
contemplating Osman’s poetry. Indeed, rather like the optical illusion of, say,
the Necker Cube or the old face/vase silhouette, Osman’s work often proceeds
exactly through this process of making the unimaginable obvious again &
again. If there is a risk in this project, generally speaking, it must lie in
the surprise being gone on a repeated reading or else in the process itself
becoming predictable. Yet reading Osman’s work, here or in earlier books such
as The Character or Amblyopia, I don’t find her succumbing
to such traps, precisely because – even those she actively eschews the lyrical
– she writes with such precision, intelligence & wit (& in Essay, often demonstrating whimsy in
visual as well as linguistic dimensions).
Consider
for example that line quoted above, in which life sentence is disrupted by gaps followed at a distance by what
might be either hiccups or a reiteration of the Latin term for here. Although it is the gaps in the
first two words that call attention to themselves the
gap that really is most completely absent is precisely that which would have
made this free-floating phrase what it claims apparently to be, a sentence,
& that’s the predicate. Instead what we get is immanence as hiccup, as
savvy an exposition of Olson’s sense of proprioception as I’ve ever seen, immanence
as Latin hiccup.
Osman is
obsessed with predicates – it turns up again & again in these works, often
in the form of an “=” or (if not less often, at least less palpably) is. Rule One of bad creative writing
courses, of course, is to employ the active voice & dispense wherever
possible with conjugates of to be. Yet,
as any good surrealist knows, is is in fact the most powerful of all verbs precisely because
it is the only one that can bring two worlds together simply on the grounds
that it says so.
“Memory
Error Theater,” beyond being a title, represents three forms of substitution or
displacement between the subject (NP as a linguist would parse it, noun phrase)
& whatever context or judgment might be made about it (the predicate). Not
surprisingly, a major source for Osman are court records – a verdict is a major
mode of predication – and political speeches (politicians are practiced at
displacing content).
This isn’t
the most coherent of notes – which is because I always feel, as here, as tho I
need to read & reread Osman – I’m always coming across things I’ve missed
before. For example, the opening passage or section of “Memory Error Theater”
is a boxed grid of 21 common editing marks. The relationship this has to
“Error” is immediately apparent &, to my mind at least, to “Memory” as well
(albeit secondarily). But any relationship to “Theater” immediately strikes me
as more strained. Or at least it does until I realize (1) that each of the
seven columns has a header that includes not just a number, but also (2) major
bodies from the solar system, in this order from left to right: Moon, Mercury,
Venus, Sun, Mars, Jupiter & Saturn. The three
marks under Moon, for example, are those for delete, insert a space & query
to author. The first thing that occurs to me once I notice the planets etc.
is that it’s a scheme that proceeds from the center of the universe outward
Except that it’s not. The Moon is where one would today expect to find the Sun,
while that occurs at the point where one would expect to find (an absent)
Earth. It’s as if one were looking at the solar system without a sense of one’s
own presence in the mix, while putting the moon rather than the sun at the
center.
Secondly,
this grid doesn’t just contain editorial marks – presented graphically the way
one would expect to find them in Words
into Type or the Associated Press
Style Guide or The
I’ve
promised