I
know Alice Jones not through the literary world, but
the political one – among the progressive scene of the San Francisco Bay Area,
especially the left medical & therapeutic communities, she & I have
several friends in common. Indeed, I met Jones well before I knew that she
wrote & before she published her first collection, The Knot, after winning a contest with Alice
James Books back in1992. At the time, my sense was that
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Tsering Wangmo Dhompa
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Pattie McCarthy
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Elizabeth Robinson
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Edward Smallfield
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Cole Swenson
– tho you will find Edward Kleinschmidt
Mayes and Valerie Coulton there as well, as if just
to verify that my first take wasn’t entirely an hallucination.
Now,
however, I’m holding Gorgeous
Mourning in my hands, Alice Jones’ newest volume just out from
Apogee. This book frankly is a revelation. It’s a sequence of 72 prose poems,
ranging in length from short to very very short, that
are as tightly composed as anything I’ve read in ages. While some retain a
vestige of narrative lyric, they do so with a tautness & precision so exact
as to border on the impossible, such as “Bristle”:
In the car, she reached over to stroke his thigh, he pulled away. The
radio was saying “Skirmishes broke out along the border” and he wanted to argue
causes, economy or culture. She thought of the Dalai Lama’s one naked shoulder,
a life of feeling the wind in an armpit, exile.
One
can certainly build a narrative out of these three simple enough elements, but
even if one hears the second & third meanings within, say, border, the leap from thigh to shoulder & armpit is
such a bold sideways stroke as to give this piece a depth & resonance it could
not carry simply as “tale.” The final exile
rings all that much more loudly for it.
Some
of the poems here flirt with the new sentence, such as “Circle,” but my
favorites are those that hold onto just enough of their traditional frameworks
to empower the shifts within a disruptive as well as connective function,
particularly when Jones lets her ear drive the forward logic of the writing. A
good example is how “Reply” takes off from the mode of the letter:
Dear one, remember our moon-set walk
across the trestle bridge, trees full of parasitic mistletoe? Are you still
eating beef tendon and gristle soup with noodles? My unattended yard now blooms
with purple thistles. They fire guided missiles from the mainland, pointed like
flying fish, landing with a piscatory splash off-shore. Piss-poor shots, I’d say. The pistil is to stamen
as mortar is to pestle, as heart is to well-aimed pistol, as I am to your
epistle. Missing you, yours.
Read
that aloud a few times. The stl combination
occurs eight times in 80 words, not counting how it crosses the line with the pĭ combination from such outliers as piscatory & Piss-poor (let alone parasitic, purple, pointed). This poem
is a feast for the ludic ear.
There
are times, & this would seem to be one of them, when a poet so transcends
the roots of whichever tradition they chose, that any reader has to acknowledge
that they’ve arrived as a major writer whatever their aesthetic stripe. I might
place Alice Jones alongside the likes, say, of Robert Hass,