“Leaving
the Atocha Station” became an elegy last week. The poem, one of John Ashbery’s
most famous early works, beginning with the lines
The arctic honey blabbed over the report causing darkness
And pulling us out of there experiencing it
he meanwhile . . . And the
fried bats they sell there
dropping from sticks, so that the menace of your prayer folds . .
.
Other people . . .
flash
the garden are you boning
and defunct covering . . .
Blind dog expressed royalties . . .
comfort of your perfect tar grams nuclear world bank tulip*
might
not seem the prototypical elegy &, so far as we can tell,
neither poet nor poem sought nor foresaw this fate. But in the wake of over 200
deaths and 1,500 injuries from a coordinated series of bomb blasts on the
Madrid trains, the meaning of the words Atocha
Station have been irrevocably transformed. Indeed, the instant you
associate the name with explosions certain words in the text – darkness, pulling us out, menace, prayer
folds, flash, nuclear & on & on – start to shift into a new,
previously unimagined alignment in the reader’s mind. It’s as if the poem has
been waiting over 40 years for these connotations to be unveiled.
This
is not particularly a defect in Ashbery’s poem, which I’ve always taken to be a
great one. But it tells us something about the nature of art, the nature of
poetry, that relates back to this discussion of poetry & anonymity we’ve
been having. Or I’ve been having, with many, many replies. And that is, contra
I.A. Richards et al, that the poem, however well wrought it might be, never is
composed with the impermeable glaze of an urn. Works of art, just like words
& phrases – embedded, gay marriage,
weapons of mass destruction, electability – acquire new associations &
through them meanings shift. Indeed, a major reason we need a Supreme Court is
precisely because words mean different things at different times. The word privacy, for
example, currently very much under debate. The word marriage. The entire premise of the strict constructionists – that the
meaning of laws should be fixed at the moment of their passage – is predicated
upon a concept of language that is patently bogus.
The
question of anonymity and its opposite – a category for which, tellingly, we
have no easy name, only approximates – is really one of what do we permit into
the poem & where do we let “non-present” elements sway our reading, our
interpretation, our judgment. Would a poem by Richard Hugo published
under John Ashbery’s name suddenly become interesting? Would the inverse be
true as well?
When
we were walking up
There
are certainly moments in the responses I received to suggest that a few – maybe
more than a few – of this blog’s readers felt likewise. One new formalist blog
called me “a condescending douchebag” for a day or so, tho they’ve since edited
out those remarks. People who didn’t share the values conveyed through the
poems – really the only thing some readers had to go on – tended to be highly
vituperative: “this sounds like a teenage girl with braces cutting into her
lips” means what, exactly? Besides, that is, the fact that the respondent
hasn’t thought through the sexist implications of his own language. [Ditto the
word “douchebag” above.]
There
are multiple things going on here. One is that a poem without a poet's name is, in
some very real sense, incomplete – that, to my eye, is the problem with
projects like Anon. A second one –
one that I tapped into without fully realizing its implications, I think – is
that we’re in a very specific moment in American literary history. In the
1950s, the number of practicing poets in the
In
fact, one of the ways we do speak of poetry is in terms of its heritage with
regard to an identifiable community, thus
So
this is, for me, the second place where Larry’s argument breaks down. When you
see a poem in journal by a poet whose name you don’t know, the only instant
association you can make is predicated on the journal itself. If it’s House Organ, with its post-Black
Mountain stance, you might come to one conclusion. If it’s Mark(s)
out of
So
Larry’s dream of the unpolluted text is exactly that, a myth. I can post poems
anonymously on my blog, but it’s still my blog. Or your blog.
Or it’s Larry bringing you a sheaf of poems he typed up & copied. There’s
always a context.
I
can publish under pseudonyms, a la Araki Yasusada or Ern Malley, but the
project itself takes on many of the elements we would otherwise associate with
The Person. You can’t really escape it there either. If you think of a project
like Anon, you realize pretty quickly
that it’s one thing if they publish anonymous work by people whose writing you
know or anonymous work by people of whom you have never heard.
And
even if this myth could be realized, you would still have the problem of
“Leaving the Atocha Station.” The language of the text is no more freed of the
impacts of the Outside, of commerce with the quotidian, of a reader’s
assumptions & associations, than anything else.
The
unspoken question behind Larry’s anonymity is this: how do you know whether or
not a poem is any good? I only published ones that I liked & that happened
to be in my backpack at the exact moment Larry & I were talking. In
retrospect, I wish I’d picked something by
Names
may be the simplest shorthand we have for so many of the diverse external
pressures on the poem. One year ago, I had no clue who
Stacy Szymaszek was. Today, that name conjures up an aesthetic, a poetics so
clearly defined one can almost taste them, a sense of subject – in her case,
the sea – a set of proclivities in her writing (she likes to use her ears, for
example, far more actively than a lot of other poets) and even a literal
community, the
In
my day job, we call that brand equity. Stacy Szymaszek has acquired a lot in
the past year. Brenda Iijima, Charles Borkhuis, Noah Eli Gordon and Lisa Jarnot
all have brand equity as poets as well. What we associate with those brands,
their names, and the degree to which we recognize them – top-of-mind as the
focus groups say – may vary, just as do their poetics. But the social process
is largely the same.
That,
in fact, is why Silliman’s Blog isn’t called something terminally cute, like so
many other weblogs. Who, for pity’s sake, is sodaddictionary? Whether he’s a poet I
love or hate – and I do presume it’s a he, based on internal textual details –
there is nothing about that blognym that will ever cause me to pick up one of
his books, simply because I wouldn’t know how to associate it. But there must
be 50 poets whose work I knew first as bloggers –
That’s
also why my blogroll generally uses real names – I’ve really resisted calling
people by the Internet equivalent of CB radio handles & cringe at every
exception I make, whether because I can’t really figure it out – 2 Blowhards or
Grand Text Auto, for example – or because they write and ask that I stick to
something silly, like Karl Merleau-Marcuse or
Johanna’s Rutabaga. It’s one thing when a writer has a serious reason for
needing to be anonymous, such as the Invisible Adjunct who often reports on the
demeaning aspects of a career that is permanently temporary & in jeopardy,
or even for a group blog like IowaBlog or As/Is. But
otherwise, it’s mostly an index of discomfort with the idea that, as a writer, you
are a brand. Just like Janet
Jackson. Like Martha Stewart.
I’ve
argued before about poets failing to deal with that aspect of their lives &
work. But it comes into play for us as readers as well. That really is what
Larry Fagin is asking when he tells me that “names are the biggest cop-out” in
poetry. What is a poem dissociated from its brand? His presumption is that it’s
still the poem. But I would counter that, at a very important level, no, it’s
not. Even more than generic oatmeal from your supermarket is not the same as Quaker
Oats, which, more often than not, also manufactured that generic brand.
Finally,
to look at the question from a radically different angle, I’d recommend
*
Ellipses in the original.
**
Tho he could be rightly excused as saying that Deep Image (a) came somewhat
later, circa 1965, and (b) never really was a single thing, given the presence
of Robert Bly, James Wright, Jerome Rothenberg &