I’ve never been clear if Bill Deemer ever lived in the San Francisco Bay Area, where so much of the New Western poetry of the 1960s came together, or whether he has always been up in the
I wouldn't be an American if I didn't do a little self-promotion. In that tricky vein of remembering just what it was like when you first read a Richard Brautigan poem during that time (50s-60s) or a Philip Whalen poem, or in further time a Louis Jenkins poem, and now Jim Dodge poem, and Eileen Myles poem, that flash. Never take a flash lightly. Bill Deemer is our Han-Shan and has lived for decades in a quiet corner of
Deemer comes very close these days to being a haiku-ist – his impulse for the short poem constructed around consciously counted syllables & a two- or three-part logic is broken only when he gathers several of these together, as in what I take to be the title work, “Variations on a Theme”:
Swallow
no bigger than that
flies all the way south
Crocus
no bigger than that
pushed winter aside
Insect
no bigger than that
needs so many legs
Splinter
no bigger than that
won’t be ignored
Tear
no bigger than that
ruins her makeup
Ant
no bigger than that
plunders & wars
Piaf
no bigger than that
but all Paris listened
Mosquito
no bigger than that
puts lumps on my head
Haiku
no bigger than that
made Basho famous
Nest
no bigger than that
shelters a family
Puddle
no bigger than that
reflects the sky
I can get into the efficiency of these stanzas almost instantly, a poetics with clear affinities with Phil Whalen & Anselm Hollo, say. They’re deliberately anti-ambitious, which I suspect must raise up a whole range of emotions when other poets read these works.¹ It takes a particular kind of gall to write without ambition & Deemer knows it:
FAME & FORTUNE
Fame:
the cows stop eating
to watch me pass.
Fortune:
more blackberries
than I will ever pick.
There are numerous homages to Issa & Basho, and a suite of six poems all offering variations on Williams’ “Red Wheel Barrow.” There is room for sentiment, humor, a little grumpiness. What there isn’t room for is excess or waste – this book’s primary value is an economy of precision. On its own terms, it’s a delight.
¹ I’ll be almost shocked if I don’t get a comment or email to the effect of “Geez, Silliman, you used to be so cutting edge!” But what that writer wouldn’t recognize is that as recently as the 1960s, this was cutting edge.