The next thing one notices
about “Survival,” and about Clean
& Well Lit in general, is that Raworth is not amused. The puckish
wit of “Lion Lion” –
the happy hunters are coming back
eager to be captured, to have someone unravel the knot
but nobody can understand the writing
in the book they found in the lion’s lair
or of “The Conscience of a Conservative” – both
collected in Tottering State – has been
supplanted by a far more political tone: the first line in Clean & Well Lit is “the obsolete ammunition depot.” In that
poem, “Out of the Picture,” “Survival,” “Blue Screen” & elsewhere in these
works of the late ‘80s & early ‘90s, Raworth is far more apt to deploy a
language that is public in its origin, the discourse of journalism & admin istration. This shift isn’t as dramatic, say, as the renunciation of
LeRoi Jones & emergence of Amiri Baraka a generation earlier & Raworth,
unlike Baraka or, say, Denise Levertov, opts for ambiguity & nuance as
central to his vision, but the transformation is profound nonetheless.
From long before Jones (The Anathemata), Bunting (Chomei at Toyama) or Auden, British
poetry has history of political engagement & Ed Dorn’s excursions to the U.K. in the ‘60s carried forward his own Olson-derived
slant on how politics might be integrated into the poem. My own sense is that
Raworth carries this sense of engagement one step furth er, perhaps more, in the ways in which he points the
political toward the personal:
out it
makes a noise
to the
men and women who work
on the
police computer
with a
piece of piano wire
politely smiling
in front
of the camera
plain
clothes, nothing conspicuous
an
unusual weapon
after a hot
dinner
bent to fit
any body
on the
verge of cracking
strange things
that make existence
these lost
parts of the city
shrouding all of
us
The key line to this stanza,
as is so often the case, is exactly the one that sounds “out of place” – after a hot dinner – personalizing
precisely the blandness of police work envisioned not as “cops & robbers,”
but as bureaucrats before all else. The three lines that conclude the stanza
immediately preceding this one pitch the tone more sharply:
an
imaginary country
complete in
every detail
in a
perennial state of war
An almost
perfect portrait of the Bush (II) admin istration several years avant le lettre. Thus, with this frame, the innocent piano wire of the
next stanza becomes, in addition to all its other meanings, a possible
instrument of torture.
Raworth’s politics are
progressive but essentially unnamable. It’s interesting that Raworth, who has
been known to issue political Christmas
cards & whose forays into editing have also
reflected a left-of-Tony Blair perspective, generally has shied away from
critical writing as such save for obituaries. That’s a genre that allows him to
write positively about what he believes in, but in terms that are at once both
personal & settled. Poems such as “Survival” complement this by enabling
Raworth to display the dystopian discourses of daily life in a context rich
with ambivalence as well as horror.