As in T as in Tether, David Bromige’s most recent book,
is divided into four sections: “T as in Tether,” and three others recognizably
titled for different stages of the PC booting process – “Initializing,”
“Establishing” and “Authenticizing.” On my PCs at least – & I’m a true
agnostic, having one each of Dell, Compaq, HP and IBM systems around the house
– that last stage is called authenticating,
the process of verifying authenticity. That Bromige has revised the term here
for his own purposes – “Authenticizing” might be the process perhaps of adding authenticity – is characteristic
both of the sorts of devices he employs & the surgical wit this revision
embodies.
Indeed, the book itself
appears to have been originally entitled T
as in Tether, the additional As in coming
sometime after the “forthcoming books” web page at Chax Press was uploaded.*
There is a history of book titles going through this sort of evolution – Robert
Duncan, for example, refers in several places to Opening of the Field simply as The
Field as late as 1959, the full title apparently showing up at the last
minute.
Reading Bromige has always
been an experience requiring close attention. Thus the third poem from
“Authenticizing,” which has the title of “Two Highs, One Image, Many Melodies,”
begins by turning on what seems the blandest of homonyms:
Eating
hash will get you high
But not
weed. When somebody likes us
We pass
on wisdom.
This is
the stage people
like us
Tend to
get stuck at.
Because
I do like you
And I
am the news, which is bad.
Bromige is the sort of
writer whose understanding of normative grammar is excellent – as it needs to be
to construct the longer, almost Faulkneresque sentence structures he has used
at different moments in his career – so ending that third sentence with a
preposition is a device that leaps out to a familiar reader in a way that it
might not to someone who was encountering his poetry for the first time.
Bromige uses the device to accomplish a number of different ends:
- It maximizes the sound symbolism of the line –
every word is a single syllable term defined by its use of the phoneme t – the first two at the beginning,
the last three at the end – the prosodic equivalent of a great hoofer
pretending to stumble.
- The syntax enables Bromige to position “people
like us” parallel to the phrase at the end of the second line – the
positioning almost makes us forget that the second like is not the same term as the original likes.
- The positioning of “people like us” also
drives the second comparison, again using what I can only think to call
homonymic contrast, with “I do like you.”
- The terminal t sounds of the fifth line set up the accentuated stop at the
end of the seventh line’s bad. The effect may be comic, but it’s comedy in the sense of
a Swift, which is to say completely serious. Note also how this device at
the end of the seventh line echoes the fainter (but still perceptible)
comic hard stop at the end of the very first sentence: weed.
Bromige makes this all look
so easy & “natural” that it’s almost scary once you begin to delve a little
more closely into any of his texts. He pulls a very similar sequence in the
middle of the next stanza within a single stanza:
Those
feathery leaves, light green
Once
leathery, bring out
A
sinewy cadaver quality.
That leathery rhymes with feathery
seems simple enough, but what is impressive is watching how the f in feathery
sets up the v in cadaver in the third, while the terminal
y moves outward in both directions in
this line, into sinewy & into quality. The sound of these lines makes
such strong sense that you almost don’t notice just how loopy the connotations are – what precisely is a sinewy
cadaver quality? And if we
pull back just a little, we discover that Bromige has been setting this sound
sequence up since introducing the image of the oak in the meadow in the first
stanza: “Being an old oak / Isn’t all gravity. . . .” In fact, the first stanza
ends with “attractive virtue.”
Bromige’s use of the image
of the “failing tree” in a meadow that is “barely middle-aged” is at once both
playful & entirely serious. Yet in the end it leads into a sequence in the
final stanza that is ultimately far more ominous:
It’s mere
analogy, each tells the other,
And the
next step can obliterate
The
gain. Initialize me
You
cool hunk. Make my body
Drool
& drunk. The gentle touch
Of
nothing
We can
understand
Lulls
like a false establishment,
A
Senate, House, Motel, CW
Bar. I
could have danced all night
But it
wasn’t on the jukebox.
As in sinewy cadaver quality or even And
I am the news, which is bad, each move here functions by undercutting: the
tree leads into the recognition of the trope. Lust leads to a list of
progressively déclassé establishments (in which House functions as its own homonym). Note also how the titles of
earlier sections of this book turn up.
The constant undercutting,
the allusion to pop music – especially to music that is at once retro &
hokey – and ending on a single word line that can be read as an abrupt
rejection of whatever hope the poem offers are all devices that Jack Spicer
used a lot, for example in the third of his “Ten Poems for Downbeat” in Book of Magazine
Verse:
“With
two yoke of oxen and one yellow dog, with one
Shanghai rooster and one spotted hog.”
Light baggage. Pike
County
music.
What we
carry with our bones is much like that. Light baggage that no unfriendly Indian
can take from us.
Ourselves. Yet pointed to like the compass of the needle. “
Even the line that focuses
in on Of nothing is a signature move of
Spicer’s.
I don’t think of Bromige as
being particularly Spicerian – Bromige uses humor with a softer touch, for the
most part, and his most visible influences among the New Americans have always
been the Projectivists. While the undercutting logic was visible, say, in a
relatively early book such as Tight
Corners & What’s Around Them, issued by Black Sparrow in 1974, I
certainly didn’t make a connection to Spicer then. Possibly it was because the
short prose pieces that appear in the volume were what drew such attention
& comment when the book first came out. But today I turned that earlier
book open to ”The Plot”:
Christmas 6 feet deep
Christmas
3 feet wide.
Christmas
6 feet long.
Stuffed
with straw.
Absolutely a poem that could
have appeared in almost any of Spicer’s books from Heads of the Town Up to the Aether onward.
Yet I’d never read it as such before.** What these two pieces share in common –
they’re radically different poems in some ways, written nearly three decades
apart – is that each confronts death & does so with none of the believer’s
sense of closure or completion. The darkness of the humor in the earlier poem
is not so much the description of a graveyard plot (even then Bromige texts
were turning on puns), but the insistence on Christmas. Again like Spicer, an
element whose content can only be accounted for outside of the rational.
There is a post-face at the
end of As in T as in Tether, in which
Bromige gets to the idea that
Poetry is the theory of
heartbreak. That sentence can be rearranged so that its nouns are in any order
of precedence, and still be true.
Though Spicer would never
have put it in exactly those terms, that’s as succinct
a description of where these two poets’ systems of belief – or perhaps systems
of disbelief – converge as one might find.
NB: Go here
for an earlier review of As in T as in
Tether.
* The book
has been out now for at least seven months.
** Some of
the short poems in Threads, the 1971
book the contains work immediately preceding Tight Corners, might similarly be argued as echoing aspects of
Spicer, although generally I think they’d be more of a stretch.