Between his New Direction
volumes,
As well it does. These
pieces are among the very best of Creeley’s recent work, which means that as a
reader I’m virtually hopping up & down with excitement at each new poem.
Viz:
As I rode out one morning
just at
break of day
a pain
came upon me
unexpectedly –
As I thought one day
not to
think anymore,
I thought again,
caught, and
could not stop –
Were I the horse
I rode,
were I the
bridge I crossed,
were I a
tree
unable to
move,
the lake
would have
no
reflections,
the sweet,
soft air
no
sounds.
So I hear, I see,
tell still
the echoing story
of all
that lives in a forest,
all that
surrounds me.
Like John Ashbery – the
other poet forced to put up with “greatest living poet” expectations – Creeley
has sometimes been criticized in recent years for failing to continue to
revolutionize poetry in all the ways he did during his first 30 years of
publishing. As I’ve noted with regard to Ashbery, I think this is a bum rap, in
that it makes his writing about us, rather than seeing it for what it is, his writing. Spicer’s model of the poem
as a tool for investigation for the poet
is exactly on point here. Having spent 30 or so years creating a space in which
to do his work – a process that just incidentally revolutionized poetry –
Creeley continues to demonstrate the extraordinary agility & acuity with
which he still explores this terrain.
The poem above, the tenth
section of a sequence entitled “Pictures,” makes the point perfectly. Like his
old
All of which sets up the
remarkable effect of the last line, when the mind waits in anticipation to hear
the rhyme of the previous stanza’s sounds
only to discover that it turns up embedded in the next-to-last word surrounds, which either recedes if the
reader hears the line as a whole or else bumps noisily onto that final
disruptive me. Yet this is in fact
exactly the self-involved, compulsive process that is described with great care
in the second stanza of the poem. Far from slamming the door of the poem shut
with the total closure of a terminal rhyme, Creeley has set the form up as a
lesson to us all, that it doesn’t close & that it never ends.
The poem at one level is a
little Zen parable. At another, being brought to self-perception through a
sudden pain – common enough experience that that is – is virtually the
definition of proprioception, a
term with extraordinary history & implications for Projectivist poetics. I
find myself thinking – as so often I do when confronting Creeley’s texts* --
how does he do that much & make it look so simple? I’m simply grateful that
he has.
* Oddly enough,
I first really connected with Creeley’s poetry not through the Allen anthology,
nor even the Kelly-Leary Controversy of
Poets, though by then I owned both books, but rather through a single poem
of his that was used both as epigraph & for a title in Jeremy Larner’s ‘60s campus novel, Drive,
He Said. The simplicity of Creeley’s poetry can be quite deceptive
&, at first, I was among the deceived.