Wet
water
warm
fire.
Rough
wood
cold
stone.
Hot
coals
shining
star.
Physical
hill still my will.
Mind’s
ambience alters all.
Another poem, the title
piece in fact, so closely approximates prose that Creeley does something quite
rare for him – he capitalizes the first letter at the left margin to emphasize
the line & enjambments: “We were waiting to get our / Hands stamped and to
be given a 12 pack / Of Molson’s.” The next to last work, “Memory,” imagines
Allen Ginsberg (located as “Somewhere”) “recalling his mother’s dream / about
God.” The content of the dream itself is roughly identical to the old Joan
Osborne song, What if God Was One of Us, beyond which the poem moves literally into a
consideration of the poet’s prostate. I wonder, reading it – it’s one of my
favorites in this little volume so full of gems – how a reader/poet in their
20s might respond to such a work. On the subject of age, Creeley is as
unblinking in his depictions as any war journalist. My own sense is that one’s
conception of time becomes much more cyclical & far less linear at a
certain point – the rhythm of the seasons, for example, become more palpable as
the years accelerate, which they invariably do, if only because the percentage
of your life that is contained in one such cycle becomes less with each
reiteration. Creeley is as articulate a commentator on this transition as we
have had, precisely because he shows us both the moments of closure & its
lesions.
The final work is
particularly spooky, entitled “Remember” & dedicated to Keith &
Rosmarie Waldrop, asking them to “Remember when / we all were ten . . . .” Yet
Rosmarie, eleven years Creeley’s junior, hardly was in an Eden-like setting at
that point in her life, the moment when the Allies were bombing her native land
back in the general direction of the stone age &
rounding up those leaders who didn’t commit suicide or flee to
At one level, this is a
volume with just six poems, although two are sequences of the sort that Creeley
has explored since the publication of Words.
That’s part of the marvel here, watching a master do so very much in such a
compact space. Although the volume has a 2002 copyright date on it, it’s so new
that it’s not yet listed on the Chax Press web site. I got my copy through